come down to one night?
One act of fate,
Two acts of courage,
Two souls entwined?
In between one and two,
The world fades away
And three brings me to you…
The world fades away
And three brings me to you…
“Genius might be the ability to say a profound thing in a simple way.” -Charles Bukowski
I really like this. A little Brian McKnight-esque but all in all I love the counting concept. I hear a subtle (probably unintentional) spiritual aspect in the end that leaves the reader only to their own theories on the identity of the other soul. I would like to point out that my comment is about 4 times as long as the actual poem. =)
ReplyDeleteKeep it up, Monique.